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Is this a good introduction paragraph for my essay?
I'm doing a essay on computers, but I dont know how I should write it because im confused. I'm having trouble writting the INTRODUCTION paragraph. The essay is suppose to be a "technical essay" (sortive like a report). How is this different from english essay introduction?
1. What are things that I should include in my INTRODUCTION
2. What are dos and donts
This is my INTRO:
Computer technology has evolved dramatically over the years. As technology advances, it transforms and improves society. Computer-related technology allows for enhancement of social functions previously difficult or impossible to execute. Computers have also accelerated productivity. Much less time is required nowadays to research information. Many in search of jobs and careers have reaped the rewards of computer technology. For too long, finding information about various careers was very difficult and painstaking, but the computer has revolutionized the job-search process. People now have access to virtually endless information on the career of their choice. This has permitted freer access to career opportunities that is appropriate for their lifestyle. People now can locate thousand of jobs opportunities from their personal computers. One other component of careers that has been influenced by computers is the development.
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