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Old 07-28-2008, 03:18 AM   #1 (permalink)
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is this poem good?
The truth



we walked through the woods
talked and talked
knew everything about each other in a day
but when i heard you lied
it was over
you tried to cover it up
but the only thing that you
cant hide is the truth
because sooner or later it will show.



i changed it a bit from the one i showed my teacher
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Old 07-28-2008, 03:19 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Yes. It comes from your heart that's the reason it's so good =]
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Old 07-28-2008, 03:19 AM   #3 (permalink)
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yes and henreys rong it is a poem!
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Old 07-28-2008, 03:19 AM   #4 (permalink)
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idg it, is it a joke? is it a riddle? who knows?....
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Old 07-28-2008, 03:22 AM   #5 (permalink)
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It needs a little work but it has possibilities. GOOD JOB
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Old 07-28-2008, 03:24 AM   #6 (permalink)
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The paragraph is well written but it is not a poem.
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Old 07-28-2008, 03:24 AM   #7 (permalink)
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very nice..seems like a break up peom
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