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    What do you think of this simple poem about depression?

    The Black Dragon.

    The black dragon is powerful.
    It writhes around me, catching me within its form,
    Twisting me,
    Strangling me with its tail, its claws slashing my skin.

    It bellows thick smoke, blocking my eyes, clouding the world,
    I drown in the darkness, whilst the black jaws gape and consume me.

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