I am so mad right now. Most people on Y!A thinks my poems sucks. Maybe they do, but do they give an explaintion? No. Most of them don't even read the frekkin' thing, because they are too lazy. Someone said that my poem wasn't "happy" so it wasn't "good". I've heard **** about my stuff at school, BUT I DON'T NEED IT FROM A VIRTUAL SITE!

Sorry people, I'm just mad.
here are the poems by the way:
1) You draw the knife,
that kills the brave,
and dawns the new life.

You welcome it with a sad face,
that crunches on the victorious,
and smolders the new race.

You crumble in fear,
and hold your breath,
for they are near.

2) I must find that quiet place,
where I can choose were to lace,
the lies in my life,
that cut me like a knife.

3) I kiss the sky,
for it will go by,
and I will mourn,
feel forlorn,
but outside I am strong,
for I must walk along,
with the brave,
that rave.