Thread: Please rate/fix my Yu-Gi-Oh Machina Gadgets deck. (September 2010 banlist)?

Took this deck to regionals. Did somewhat ok, considering it was my first ever tournament (local or regional). Would love to hear feedback! Thanks in advance.

Monsters (18)
Machina Fortress x3
Machina Gearframe x3
Machina Peacekeeper x2
Machina Force x1
Red Gadget x2
Yellow Gadget x2
Green Gadget x2
Cyber Dragon x1
Blackwing Gale x1
Gorz the Emissary of Darkness x1

Spells (15)
Smashing Ground x3
Book of Moon x2
Mystical Space Typhoon x2
Giant Trunade x1
Dark Hole x1
Monster Reborn x1
Pot of Avarice x2
My Body as a Shield x1
Limiter Removal x1
Pot of Duality x1

Traps (8)
Dimensional Prison x2 (Would have run three but i couldn't trade for one soon enough.)
Bottomless Trap Hole x2
Torrential Tribute x1
Trap Stun x1
Solemn Judgement x1
Solemn Warning x1

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Again, thanks!

its 4/5 you need some type of monster killing traps etc. the others are good

great
i cant think of any decent emprovements for that type of deck maybe:
Machine king
Chimaretech overdragon
cemetry bomb


TRY THIS SICK STRATEGY have cyber dragon in ur hand and then play tribute to the doomed. (destroy his best monster and chuck cyber dragon in the graveyard) play premature burial summon cyber dragon
play meteamorph and cos u got less life points then ur opponent cos off cyber dragon ur monster attack will double.
play ur normal onster cos u have only special summoned a monster. RIP UR OPPONENT APART =)


by the way do u live in da UK

great
i cant think of any decent emprovements for that type of deck maybe:
Machine king
Chimaretech overdragon
cemetry bomb


TRY THIS SICK STRATEGY have cyber dragon in ur hand and then play tribute to the doomed. (destroy his best monster and chuck cyber dragon in the graveyard) play premature burial summon cyber dragon
play meteamorph and cos u got less life points then ur opponent cos off cyber dragon ur monster attack will double.

play ur normal onster cos u have only special summoned a monster. RIP UR OPPONENT APART =)


by the way do u live in da UK