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08-29-2008

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Meh. You start to build the tension toward the end but it just dies. The climax is actually anticlimactic.

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I wrote something, please tell me what you think?

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/gtrking23/309921/

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It's really good! Keep it up!

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