I'm writing a story and this is one of the plots im thinking of. Please tell me what you think and whether you would read it.

A teenage girl with schizophrenia (she can see ghosts) is shipped off to boarding school after her mother is accused of murder. The boarding school is a large school who helps a large amount of students with a variety of problems. Her dyslexic best friend goes there, as well as her blind brother and her pen pal. Her pen pal is a teenage boy who suffers depression and is getting over an addiction to cigagrettes and cocaine. They met through a "pen pal program" designed for troubled teenagers, she was assigned to the program by her counsellor.

At the school the main character experiences memory gaps and is soon diagnosed with Dissociative Identity disorder. A student is mysteriously murdered and police are stationed at the school with every student being interviewed. IT just so happens that the main character can't remember where she was at the suspected time of the murder. Becuase of her dissociative identity disorder she is under constant watch. A police officer is mudered and it is soon almost certain the the protagonists alternate is the murderer.

In the story it is discovered that the alternate is her twin sister who dissappered when they were little. The girls' father was a demon which makes the girls half demon. the twins' eyes were often black and the mother, scared to death accidently murdered one of them. Now the twin is back for revenge.

The protagonist thinks she may have murdered the student and possibly ven the victim her mother was accused of murdering but admitting to that would either put her in a juvenile camp or a mental institute.


She tries to focus on helping her best friend read and her pen pal, who becomes her love interest get over his addicitons, but she is under a constant fear of her twin sister. Her mission is to free her mother an rid of her twin, but how will she do it?

Thankyou so much for reading