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What do you think of my poem?

11-14-2008

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What do you think of my poem?

We waited for the sun to rise
our oars lightly skimming
the surface of the water
waiting for the sun to set
the light breeze cooling us
it was magical almost
I hadn't experienced it before
but now i have

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