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what do you think of this??? i dont know weather its a song or a poem......
...the feelings just flowed out? Im hearing demons in my sleep,
I fall steep into this pit,
Nobody weeps when im down and out...
Just seems like they dont give a sh.it...,
How could i cry?? i carry the world on my shoulders...
No energy to even die the pain just keeps growing...
Let me fly with my wings spread heavens my destiny...
I give my blood and swet but let the lord take the rest of me...,
My cries fall so hard on deaf ears... nobody hears...
Maby when im buried in my casket these bastards will cop my fear....
Liven shedding tears for years tryna do good and raise my son...
Picture my perfection but i live in dreams and the hope weighs a tonne,
No im not a perfect man but i do the best i can...
so why tare the heart from my chest and squash with your bare hands???
Hail mary full of grace... halo be thy name.. take these demons from my face and disgrace there haunting shame.. These are the tearz of a broken heart save me from drowning... take away the vicious days and bless me a happy surroundin.
some guys may think that this song is very depressing and it is ment to be.. it was written to express my emotions at that present time... i figure that writing my emotions is the best way for me to climb up a rocky situation.. all you guys that say its not poetry and that it is crap.. i respect your opinion... but when i put my pen to paper this is what came out.. i wrote it in 3 minutes.... i didnt sit there for half hour planning it... so to me its full of real feeling... im not a weirdo tho... i have lots of sad writing... happy writing... i write through all emotions and i never called it a poem or song cuz i dont know what it is... i just write to release feelings to paper and it helps....
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