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tell me what you think of my poem please?
well im 16 i wrote this a year ago and im not putting the whole thing up because its not copyrighted yet.please give me honest opinions .Its called Stumble to my senses
The brush of your lips against my cheek makes me shiver thinking soon ends will meet.
The intoxicating smell of your cologne lingers in my memory.
That sweet melodic voice of yours soothes my soul and opens my heart.
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