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Is poetic attitude a little much?
Old 08-29-2008   #1 (permalink)
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Is poetic attitude a little much?
'HeadStrong"

Beautiful delusion,
implication of my own
imperfection.
yes...

I know.

Guilty doesn't mean
the gavel taps a
snare drum
re-applying the already
spoken word.

Iron bars
what I gave
my soul to.
don't...

pity me.
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I like your rhythm and flow, as for the message, I'm a little confused. It sounds like a prison sentence, only there is no image of the crime done, unless it happens to be the "implication of my own/imperfection."
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