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Is this poem good?
I wrote this poem, about a guy I used to have a crush on, but he became a total jerk, so I wrote a poem:
I thought he was the one for me,
The one who’d always be there,
But I guess the feeling inside of me
Knows that he doesn’t care.
He makes me laugh every single day,
But he never seems to notice,
The little girl staring back his way,
With the biggest little grimace.
But then one day, he changed very fast,
Something I was not ready for,
I wish that this would all just pass,
But as I go on, there is even more.
He says bad words, just to be cool,
But I don’t seem to get it,
He is acting like a total fool,
I am sure he has lost it.
I was certain he was the one for me,
But now I can see he isn‘t,
I’ve got a future ahead of me,
And he is not in it.
He has turned into a psychopath,
This insane little jerk,
I had the best times with him in math,
But I guess that was just a perk.
That's not it, I didn't have room, I will post it in the details!
He has his eyes set on another girl,
She’s practically man-bait,
My thoughts are beginning to unfurl,
But I fear it’s too little, too late.
In a year he will be gone forever,
I will never see him again,
Trying to forget is quite an endeavor,
Hopefully he will have matured by then.
There, that is the whole poem. I am not sure how good it is. My friends like it, but I don't know if they are telling the truth.
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