Cami

Hope

As i lay and think of you ' i think of all the funny things you say and do.
I love to see your eyes so true 'as i just sit and stare at you.
I see your sweet lips that are fresh like wine ' and hope soon that one day soon; you;ll soon be mine.
When i dream i dream of you and think of all the things i want us to do.
I would take you in my arms tonite and hope and pray that this all will turn out all right.
One day soon you;ll you;ll travel this way' and i am hoping that you my love with decide to stay
I hope one day you'll love me too ' as sweetie i have always been treated like a dirty old pair of running shoes.
With all this love you've shown to me i thank you so much as my heart is now free.
I usually write Dark poetry but this man has helped me so much.I wrote it for him and he was leaving so i had to rush thru it.next time will be better though.,.

Chelsey Leigh

i love it

million$moufpiece

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*hey*

I like it... give it a 6 out of 10. in the middle u have "soon" repeated many times. and at the end, u need to take out one adjective for the "dirty old running shoe" for it to fit. other than that.. its pretty good

cw_mc_05

I wish I could get a poem like that written for me...

Dune

I liked it, if you are talking about your child.