Need help with a rape scene in my ncis fan fiction story?

Arynne · 08-11-2009, 05:46 AM

the guy is Ari and the girl that gets raped is Violet

Ari: killed Violet's mom (her mom was Kate an NCIS agent)
he's 32
he's a terrorist

Violet: her lover is Tony DiNozzo
she's 14
she's a soon to be NCIS agent but works there kinda

I don't know how to write a rape scene between them I want it to take place in a warehouse. so any advice?

sgtUFpepper · 08-12-2009, 05:39 AM

david h · 08-12-2009, 05:42 AM

wow, thats pretty graphic right there.

The most horrific rape story I can think of right now would have to be in the Shawshank Redemption.

Rape is a horrible horrible thing, like that nightmare where you cant scream or run away from. If you really want to talk about it in a detailed graphic way, make it truthful. You don't need any kind of fiction to make it more scary.

Maybe check out some true stories. Weirdnews.com I think is the place?

Good luck, with what I can only hope is a way to bring awareness of how horrible rape is?

David

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