Violet A

As you gaze into the distance while your hope is running free,
I know that one day you'll like tomorrow!
As you love for me,
As you like me for being me!
And i Love just as you say.
I will love you in one wonderful WAY!

As you look into my eyes,
While you love in running free
I love you more than anyone.
I know you more than anyone
I've been with you all my life
I want to be your friend forever!
Oh yeah yeah yeah
As you look into the future,
you see me by your side.
I love you now because you are!
My friend forever we get together to knooooooooooooooooow
just what to think!

Thanks guys
Violet A

jamand

Sorry! Boring - read first few lines and that was it - spelling was poor as well. Nothing that hasn't been done before

IncoStress

This person must be real special for you to write such a heart felt poem. I hope they realise how lucky they are. I think you should post this on www.poetrybox.com

im here

boring.....

zizou

its not bad but its a bit long, thats what i think
this poem shows ur feelings about a certain person which is good. This person must feel very happy and mabe even emotional because of ur feelings towards this person.
i think u shud make it better by makin it shorter, add metaphors or similies and make it more understanding.
i rate it 6/10
well done

alyson.earle

Sorry, I'm not keen on it.

kleptomanicsheep

sorry - not for me. with the yeahyeah yeah thing you might do better as song lyrics though

Chelsgurl818

yeah i read for a second then got bored put more somethhing in your poems but yeah that bored me to death