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I need some help with this chapter, is it good?
Im just started on a book, and I wanted to get some feed back on the first chapter. I have twists Im throwing in, so it will differ alot from the first capter. just tell me what changes would make it better, and also, the name is non-existant, so suggestions are open
here it is, enjoy
tell me what you think, and what changes would make it better. also, no name yet, so suggestions are open.
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