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how is this poem, and does it have a could flow?
This ache.
This break.
My heart and soul.
My brain can not comprehend.
This feeling.
I feel as if this is love.
But is it too young?
Can i prevent you
From breaking my heart,
As so many others.
And if you do will you
At least look back,
And remember the times we shared.
Paired
Together in pain and
Happiness.
Love, it has taken over me.
It seems right.
But should i trust it?
Or use my better
Judgement?
I will never know
The right answer.
But i will love
With all my heart.
Please dont
Please dont go.
I may not figure
These things out.
But all i have
Is love.
does that have the right "flow" tell me what you think. thank you.
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