Thread: Is this a good intro?

I never really thought much about how a name like Ozwald might affect a child. That is until i was staring right at him, Ozwald Grant. Lucky for him though, he happened to have an older brother with a well known reputation. Elliot Grant, who helped his younger sibling in the social media, teaching others to just call the poor guy Oz.

The first kid to call him by his full name had been Alex Truman. The last kid to ever call him by his full name had been poor Alex Truman. To put the point straight, after watching Elliot Grant ram his fist into Alex's nose, no other fifth grader made that mistake ever again.

I think you should try for a better intro since no one can understand the story from this one...Hope this helps

I want to read more of this... This is a kind of book you want to know more of, so you start reading more until-BAM!-you finish the book.

So yes, I like this intro.