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Do you think these poems are good?
Hands grasp and eyes flutter, her breath is taken away by her significant other. Innocence is gone and morals are forgotten. Her heart shatters into a million pieces as she shoves the jagged little glass pieces, he watches her bleed, he has the same disease. So self destructing so mind conducting. Slides down her throat feels so good, keep on pouring only then life feels good. Addicting sickness we’ve all seem to of caught. The world has made us immune to the medicine making us forget.
To sum it up shortly it's about "teens" mostly and how we do dumb things and by it to what the world and media and people tell us like anorexia, smoking drinking sex etc.
2nd one is.....
Bow down here she comes, with all her glory that she has won. But loneliness spills through her lips, over powering everything she has missed. Smiling and shaking hands her eyes just hit the ground and she holds back a powerful frown. Compliments that she is the best when the words she wants to speak she can’t quite get off her chest. An agony so disgusting and a life so jaded it’s no wonder the words she wants to say can’t be stated.
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