So I am writing a series of books and I would like your opinion on them. Now, this is going to be very long I think, so I would very much appreciate your patience and consideration while reading this. I will start off by explaining the history of the plot, then by explaining the history of the antagonist and another man, then I will explain the main characters and their relation to the plot.

At the beginning of time, Four creators were formed and they were of their own species. One creator was a human, which was a normal blood, another one was a Mage, which had magical abilities and could cast spells, another one was a strange species called a which was given one gift to control a natural element., and the last creator was a spirit which was created after the death of the Human creator. They repopulated their own species and their species loved in peace. The Mage creator soon was unhappy because their was unequal blood and the ideas came from different minds. The Mage creator then left. War soon broke out between the species and the Bloodborns, Mages, and Spirits created homes for them to live in so that the humans can't find them. The Bloodborn creator did not create as much repopulation as the Mage, Human and Spirit creators. The Humans then lived on their own in the world.

The year is now 1835 and Deyanira Worth is living with her half American and half French family. Being in a wealthy family and living in the South, her family owned slaves. They were the wealthiest in all the South. Deyanira and her sisters, Serilda, Marise. And Cynthia were all gifted Mages. Deyanira, Serilda, and Marise abused Cynthia a lot for not having the same interests as them. So Cynthia cast a spell on Deyanira which split her personality in half. Her dark and evil part of her was trapped in a mirror while her good part remained in her body. Cynthia then took her anger out on Serilda and Marise and she tortured them. Cynthia then escaped from her home. Some years later Deyanira made friends with a poor boy named Hyman Aracelis. Hyman was a Bloodborn and he accepted all species. Deyanira, while living with her good and nice part, accepted Hyman's species. How ever if Deyanira was back as her old self, she would kill him because she hated other species that were not Mages, just like the Mage creator. They both found magical plants that they found out can give them immortality, unless the user of the plant was killed. They both ate the plant and they later on married. Serilda and Marise one day went up to the mirror in which Deyanira's dark part was trapped in. They both used a spell to raise her dark part and her dark part went back to Deyanira's body. When Deyanira was herself again. She killed Hyman, realizing that he was a Bloodborn. But since Hyman still had the magical plant inside him, it made him into Hal's spirit and half living Bloodborn. Hyman made a never made action by being half dead and half alive, so he became further known as the descendent of the Bloodborn creator. Hyman created his own Haven to keep Spirits and Bloodborns away from danger. Deyanira, Serilda and Marise went on a hunt to kill off every Bloodborn and human. They killed every but a handful of Bloodborns, and they killed off a quarter of America's population of Humans. Deyanira and her sisters went far North and made a home there for Mages, but Deyanira stillwanted to continue her hunt, and she also wanted the answer for how to kill a spirit.


Fast forward to the current year. Kenneth Hurst makes friends with a mysterious girl with silvery white hair, she didn't dye it nor is she albino. Her name is Vivianne Turow and she claims she was born like it. After the entire city of Salisbury Maryland is destroyed in a devastating flood, a spirit named Felix Puckett tells them both that they are one of the last Bloodborns to ever live. After discovering their powers (Kenneth is gifted with fire and Vivianne is gifted with water and ice) they fight off evil Mages sent by Deyanira to kill them, and the Mages are defeated. The trio of Kenneth, Vivianne, and Felix go to the mansion of another Bloodborn named Evelyn Schwartz. Under her mansion is a transporting system to a place where Deyanira is raising her forces to destroy all of the human population on the world and to kill the remaining Bloodborns, and to also figur out how to kill a spirit. Kenneth, Vivianne, Felix, and Evelyn meet other Bloodborns and the two children of Hyman and Deyanira named Iris and Kesler. Hyman turned them into trees so that they could survive Deyanira's hunt in the 1800's. Iris is born a Bloodborn and Kesler was born a Mage, but he still lived with Hyman and the other Bloodborn's and spirits. Them and more characters join together to fight against Deyanira, her sisters and the whole species of Mages who want to destroy the global population of Blosborns Humans and Spirits.