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    Junior Member mmmilCmmris†'s Avatar
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    Do you like my song/poem? I call it "From The Inside"?

    You think you are all so perfect,
    Wipe off the stains with your guilty concept,
    I get up everyday hating to be alive,
    Kicked out of the society, I am just breathing and not alive.

    I know I got some imperfections,
    But how can you collect them up and throw them in my face,
    Life is not about how good you look, how cool you are or how much of friends you got. Life is not a race,

    Your self infected misconceptions,
    Will kill what you have created by your false corrections,
    One big actor is what you are
    But I can see inside you. I can see who you really are,
    Inside you are ugly..... ugly like me.

    This is the last straw,
    I cant take it anymore,

    Kiss yourself good bye,
    Because I Am gonna sing you your last lullaby.

    By:
    ANTI CHRIST

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    a 4...
    I think you need to look into anger management or at least need a good hug and some warm milk and cookies.

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    i like it ...im not good on rating but i give it a seven and a half


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