gummybearz024

It was one of those silent moments, everything feels awkward... and worse, he's just staring at you, giving a puzzled look. I tried to shy away, but the sun allowed me to catch a glimpse of his eyes. They were gorgeous, filled with warmth and I adored them. I couldn't resist his hazel brown eyes, which was making things harder than I'd thought. So I bit my tongue, hoping the pain would block my thoughts. I took a deep breath and sighed. Then I tried to break the silence.
“I'm sorr–

I know I know it's really not that interesting T.T Ahh dont kill me o.o;;..
I was lazy so it's extra crappy now -.-" gee even better
But i'll fix some parts up later?!?!? ^^
And and and and please be honest
Is it gay/retarded.. in a way? o.o;;
And [I have no idea whaddsoever im going to make my story about ^^ sorta... at least. Im writing as I go, but I guess I know whadd my proglogue's gonna be about o.o;;... the rest unsure of for nowws ^^]
Wells thank yous
Oh waitts o.o;; Please give suggestions opinions and etc ^^ and you can re-edit if chu want
Thanks
[I think I used silence too much...]
Faustian
-Sigh- yeah I know >.<
I guess maybe i'll change everything o.o;; of it, wells maybe or I might continue ^^
Thanks for your honest opinion anyways?!?
Nicole
Actually now that I love at how I write I dislike my writing style compared to others >.<
Sonole
Blah >.< sorry T.T"...
Maserati
Thank youus ^^
Peach
o.o;; <- oops?
Im use to using emotions and plus they aren't that bad anyways
And yeah I may have sounded insecure but I dont wanna use that word o.o;;
Maybe not confident?
Wells iernos.. o.o;;
And thanks for telling me it's boring I think i'd really fix it up now ^^
And yeah thats not finished o.o;;
Oops.. did I forget to tell that... ROFL my badds ^^