nagurl2007

I wrote this poem in an attempt to get a free laptop, but there were to many advertisements, anyways I just received an email from poetry.com saying that I'm a semi-finalist. I think it's a scam, but what do you guys think?

Nodding off into a deep sleep where I'm the girl
Not the awkward child with less than enough
But there, I'm the girl with the long hair and good looks
Guys want me, unlike I want myself
Self-wanting?
Narcissist, Judgmental
But not there, I'm accomplished: a man wants me
My hair is real, he is real
Real d*** shame it ain't true
A freakin' ringing, press the button
Eyes adjust, head clears
What day is it? Am I still alive?
Dang, it's 3:00 am And a few minutes
Time is relative; Like one's perception of oneself
Narcissist, Greek mythology With beautiful heroines
Am I there? No.
Only there where I'm the girl with the good looks
Move Along, There's nothing to see
But wait...finally, they're here to see me.