*~*Rate My Lyrics*~*: ABC rap...need feedback...?

SmokeyMcPot

New member
Feb 9, 2009
9
0
1
first off, im 22 and white...the rest is history...

aiight....so i wrote these lyrics... and other than the chorus, it is entirely sequenced A-Z. You'll see what I mean. It's still a little rough around the edges, but I think I'm a genius...Got plenty other material, but I thought this was a good concept... need some feedback from people in the real world...I'm about to enter a contest for a record deal so I need to know the truth....


A b c d e f g h i j k l m n o p q r s t u v w x y z now I know my ABCs…aint nobody can fux with me…

A.***hole. B***. C***. D***..
everyone f***** go home
Im just kidding
losing my nerve over possibly quitting
reality sucks
try using vicodin with xylocain
youre zapped
Always been crazy don’t ever forget goin half insane
jabberwocky kamikaze
loading my nines
opening pipelines
quickly remember studying television
uplifting vision
watchn xena
young, Zany, and brainy
cant deny
eggs fry
gettin hot
I just kid lots
miss no opportunities
producding questions
repeating sessions
tallying unexpected votes
with xeric young zygotes

Always been cool.
Dissappointin every fool
Genuine hardworking introspective jewel
killin lame motherfuckers
negating old perceptions
quickly revealin suckers
toting undeniable verbal weapons
xanthous yellow zits
accenting bad complexions
dermatology excluded, facing great heights
ive just known
late many nights
out partying
quite readily stoned
these unattainable visions will X your Z-axis

Its easy as ABC
already been chosen.
Im presidential
No need for voting
I know my ABCs
Cuz im all bout chronic
Fast like supersonic


Afghan, bubonic,
crystal, dank, endo,
frankenstein, ganja, hydro,
Indica, jane, kush, leaf, mari****a,
nuggets of purp, quality real skunk, that undisputed value wanna
xerox your zone ask bone
Cleveland definitely equals fire
get higher
I just kno like my next o
puffed quickly reefers sickly
takin unmarked vaccines
we xanax
you zantac
aboard boats chasin dolphins
excuse flipper (dolphin noise)
goin hard I just keep limber
making nice our paper quieting rainforests so
timber!
undefinable voice
was xerxes yelling? (300 clip)
Zealous a**h***
bellowing chill demands “everybody freeze!”
get hurt I jerk knees
loot!
money!
Now!
ordering people quiet!
readily strip to underwear
videotapin
watchin x-rays yoinkin zig-zags
alternating bags
choosing dank
exceedlingly frank
get high
I
just know lies
man no ones possibly quicker running
stunning
taking Usains victory wolfing xanax
youthful zombie accepting bolts crown
dont even frown
greatness hopefully intervenes
just kill like machines
notably our politician quasi republican schwarzenegger
terminator
understands
vote with Xavier you’re zero
already been caught dining eating fat gyros
hero In jerasulem
kinda like moses
noses olfactoring pretty quaint roses
smellin techs
understanding Virginia
wanting x, yellow zoot
already bought coke. describe extacy.
F******* get happy
I just keep learning more
never operate poor
quantaties ready
son take up vigilance: watch x y z
always be concerned d e f
guess how I just killed lyrically
might now offend politically
question relentlessly
see that?
Using visuals with xenobiology
you zoom astrologically beyond cosmologically
doding every fragmented goal hoping I juxtapose kindly
look maybe notice our pattern
quakin round saturn
takin unfathomable views while xylophoning your zoo

get it,? im beatin on these bars,
after traversing the stars
so kids of all ages
can break out them cages
just repeat after me
a b c d
efg
hijk
rolling with another j
lmnop
man look at me
qrstuv
w maybe NOW you
can see
x y and z
Now I know my ABCs
Aint noboby fresh as me
 
Back
Top