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    What do you think of this beginning is in good or bad? What can I do to improve it?

    It's good. Try not to keep on repeating the same words: "misery" and "pain" and "anger" and "sadness." They pop up way too often towards the end.
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    Are religious people silly for arguing over whose religion is true when it’s...

    Are you going to grow up and realise that us here fighting over which religion or no religion is right is stupid. Why are we all trying to prove it? Why are we trying to convert each other.
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